BuckyB93
Saturday, February 7, 2009 5:02:00 PM
I'm tuning up my resume for new/redo opportunity. Well, kinda new... I use to work at this place before about 5 yrs ago (seems like ages). I was laid off from them when they had to cut back.

My current company is tied to the automotive industry (we know how well that is going). Sooo... I want to keep my options open.

I have a potiential opportunity to get back with the old company. They have openings and I have some contacts within.

I'm redoing my resume but would like some feedback on it. Anyone out there willing to give me some? I have a thick skin along with a heavy coat. I can forward it to you via e-mail if you e-mail me.

stogiemac at that yahoo place

I'm looking for serious feedback to help me hone my resume. I'll gladly take smack, kicks in the ass, and wedgies at some other time.

I'm also forwarding it to my "moles" at the potiential place of employment but I figured the more input the better.

ARN
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Saturday, February 7, 2009 5:09:00 PM
List your technical knowledge first, in an organized way. Your technical strengths must stand out clearly at the beginning of your resume. Ultimately, your resume is going to be read by a thoughtful human being, but before it gets to that point it often has to be categorized by an administrative clerk, and make its way past various sorts of key word searches. Therefore, you should list as many directly relevant buzz words as you can which reflect your knowledge and experience. List all operating systems and UNIX flavors you know. List all programming languages and platforms with which you're experienced. List all software you are skilled with. Make it obvious at a glance where your strengths lie - whether the glance is from a hiring manager, a clerk, or a machine.

List your qualifications in order of relevance, from most to least. Only list your degree and educational qualifications first if they are truly relevant to the job for which you are applying. If you've already done what you want to do in a new job, by all means, list it first, even if it wasn't your most recent job. Abandon any strict adherence to a chronological ordering of your experience.

Quantify your experience wherever possible. Cite numerical figures, such as monetary budgets/funds saved, time periods/efficiency improved, lines of code written/debugged, numbers of machines administered/fixed, etc. which demonstrate progress or accomplishments due directly to your work.

Begin sentences with action verbs. Portray yourself as someone who is active, uses their brain, and gets things done. Stick with the past tense, even for descriptions of currently held positions, to avoid confusion.

Don't sell yourself short. This is by far the biggest mistake of all resumes, technical and otherwise. Your experiences are worthy for review by hiring managers. Treat your resume as an advertisement for you. Be sure to thoroughly "sell" yourself by highlighting all of your strengths. If you've got a valuable asset which doesn't seem to fit into any existing components of your resume, list it anyway as its own resume segment.

Be concise. As a rule of thumb, resumes reflecting five years or less experience should fit on one page. More extensive experience can justify usage of a second page. Consider three pages (about 15 years or more experience) an absolute limit. Avoid lengthy descriptions of whole projects of which you were only a part. Consolidate action verbs where one task or responsibility encompasses other tasks and duties. Minimize usage of articles (the, an, a) and never use "I" or other pronouns to identify yourself.

Omit needless items. Leave all these things off your resume: social security number, marital status, health, citizenship, age, scholarships, irrelevant awards, irrelevant associations and memberships, irrelevant publications, irrelevant recreational activities, a second mailing address ("permanent address" is confusing and never used), references, reference of references ("available upon request"), travel history, previous pay rates, previous supervisor names, and components of your name which you really never use (i.e. middle names).

Have a trusted friend review your resume. Be sure to pick someone who is attentive to details, can effectively critique your writing, and will give an honest and objective opinion. Seriously consider their advice. Get a third and fourth opinion if you can.

Proofread, proofread, proofread. Be sure to catch all spelling errors, grammatical weaknesses, unusual punctuation, and inconsistent capitalizations. Proofread it numerous times over at least two days to allow a fresh eye to catch any hidden mistakes.

Laser print it on plain, white paper. Handwriting, typing, dot matrix printing, and even ink jet printing look pretty cheesy. Stick with laser prints. Don't waste your money on special bond paper, matching envelopes, or any color deviances away from plain white. Your resume will be photocopied, faxed, and scanned numerous times, defeating any special paper efforts, assuming your original resume doesn't first end up in the circular file.

fishinguitarman
Saturday, February 7, 2009 5:40:00 PM
My wife is a Personnel Officer with the State....If you want I'll get her to take a look at it.....
rfenst
Saturday, February 7, 2009 5:45:00 PM
I am presuming that you have not specifically been asked by a decision-maker whether you are interested in an open position.

Aside from all the standard recommendations that apply to creating a proper resume, I think it is important for your resume, in this particular scenario, to emphasize the new skills that you now have that you lacked when you were laid off five years ago.

The person deciding whether you should get an interview- which is all a resume is good for- will know you used to work for the company. Address the question that he/she will be asking his/herself: Why should we waste our time interviewing someone who didn't previously warrant retention by our company?

BuckyB93
Saturday, February 7, 2009 6:37:00 PM
Re fishinggutiaroldmanazzhatdeerhunterbla bla bla guy.

Thanks for your input. If I can find your e-mail I'd be happy to send it to you for your better half to review. Even your review for that matter. The more input I get the better. I can always improve myself and I'm not too proud to take criticism be it good or bad.

Re 4

Good point. Why hire me back? They (sort of) came to me. “They” meaning the technical guys and engineer managers. See, I'm still good friends with many of the folks that work there, although I don't get a chance to see them as often as I'd like. I happened to be out with a couple of them on Superbowl weekend and we were talking. I mentioned my situation and they said that they have an opening now and another coming up this fiscal year (starting April).

Pretty much said “Hey dumb-ass... get your resume in.” I know them, worked sided by side with them for years, partied with them, BBQ-ed with them and are on good terms with most of them... shoot half of them were at my wedding and are still on my joke e-mail list.

When I was let go way back when, there was a lot of “tit for tat” stuff going around at the middle management level - “If I have to let this guy go, you need to let him go.” Fast forward 5 yrs...all the middle management has been replaced.

I know I can do it technically, I know I have support from internally. I just want to make sure I cover all the bases.

I'm going in on Wed to get a behind the scenes tour of the new place, hand deliver my resume and have a candid talk (beers over lunch) with one of the hiring managers.

andytv
Saturday, February 7, 2009 7:32:00 PM
I'd be glad to look it over....although, as someone who has hired hundreds of people, I always just sort of liked a clear, concise, no bull**** resume.

andytv at masonsonline dot net

donutboy2000
Saturday, February 7, 2009 8:54:00 PM
Post it here.

You will get plenty of constructive criticism.

MACS
Saturday, February 7, 2009 9:25:00 PM
Wouldn't know the first farking thing about a resume.

I've held 2 jobs in the last 22 yrs.

fishinguitarman
Sunday, February 8, 2009 2:55:00 PM
Bucky, the only change she made was putting your educational background at the top. She said everything else looked great!

EMS!

BuckyB93
Sunday, February 8, 2009 2:58:00 PM
^Thanks for the input. Give your wife a kiss for me.

I've sent it off to some other prior coworkers and have gotten some feedback also.

I'll also forward it to Andy. Again, I'm looking for a critical review. Pull no punches.

donutboy2000
Sunday, February 8, 2009 3:59:00 PM
Post it!