smithbw
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23 years ago
Okay,

Don't laugh - please - this is my last semester college product. Take a look and please provide me with your feedback. Really - Would like to know what you think.

http://polaris.umuc.edu/~bsmith6/assign3.html 

Regards,


B
BMW
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23 years ago
Mr.Mean
23 years ago
Very nice site! Check spelling on Padron and it's an A.
penzt8
23 years ago
Good job overall. You might want to check the following definition:

Filler - is a strong, flexible tobacco leaf found between the wrapper and the filler and is actually what holds the form of the cigar true to its shape.

the filler can't be the leaf that's found between the wrapper and itself.
jd1
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23 years ago
Cool.
Bargin > Bargain
Pardon > Padron
At the bottom of the page, one of the images didn't come through.
Another cigar quote: "If I had taken my doctor's advice and quit smoking when he advised me to, I wouldn't have lived to go to his funeral." George Burns

There were some nit-picky type things but all in all, a good job.
smithbw
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23 years ago
Awesome! 🙂

Thank you all for your professional feedback. What a great group of people here on our board.

Regards,

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xrundog
23 years ago
Nice Bill. Biggest thing, what Penz said, you have binder and filler kind of mixed together.
Tobasco
23 years ago
I like it! Nice job. One day I hope to develop a web page for my business. I'll probably end up hiring someone like you though!

Mag
smithbw
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23 years ago
Mag,

I work cheap...Really, this is a demo page and college project that I finished last semester. This semester, I am adding more bells and whistles to my bag of tricks.

Yesterday I was hired to put together a Webpage for the local tobacco shop here. He is paying me in cigars...A Dream Come True!!!

Let me know if are really interested.

[email protected]

Regards,


B
Spiny Norman
23 years ago
Good job! Might check that link titled "cutting importance". Appears to have an error in the URL.
Tobasco
23 years ago
smithbw, thanks for the offer. I may take you up on that! I'm going to try to do one with some software I purchased. If I end up in over my head, which is VERY possible I will contact you. I put your e-mail addy in my address list. Thanks!

Mag
jdrabinski
23 years ago
Thanks for posting that, B. I got a few links from it I hadn't seen, and looks good.

Have you tried the macromedia software? A little complicated, but pretty cool if you figure it out. (If you want a copy of it, I may be able to get a copy for you...lmk). Web design is fun, but once you get into it...man, it can become an obsession. A fun obsession, but obsession nonetheless!

I might approach my tobacconist with the web4smokes arrangement. Damn good idea.

Good stuff, dude, good stuff. Thanks for sharing it here.

John
smithbw
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23 years ago
John,


Thanks for all of your comments. I don't know that I am that deserving. I still have a long way to go to have the page the way that I want it.

I would love a copy of Macromedia Flash...I tried downloading a copy but for one reason or another - each download attempt ended with at least one corrupted file. Just could not get it to function.

Do you still have my snail mail? If not shoot me an email [email protected]

Thank you in advance for offering the product to me. I hope to encorporate some of the higher end functionality in the semesters project. I will include Java scripts, Flash and other bells and whistles...

MAG,

Just let me know, I am ready to jump in. Wow! That sounded familiar to me. Flash back to earlier days.

Regards,


B
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